I feel confident over a few features of
my draft. I am confident in my explanation of the government’s view of gun
ownership in the 1800s. I am also confident in my conclusion. Some other
positives of my essay are that I felt that it was easy to find information on
gun control, and it was not difficult to make notecards. Notecards helped me a
lot! Lastly, the putting time into a detailed outline really made writing the
draft not as difficult as it would have been without the detailed outline.
I am struggling in that I feel as though
my paper is biased against the government’s perspective of gun ownership. This
weekend I am going focus on fixing that. I am struggling in depicting what I
have interpreted in an unbiased manner. It seems as though, through research I
have found, that the government is biased against the Second Amendment, and how
can one report that in an unbiased manner? Please focus your feedback on the
bias of my paper.
Hi Jill! I completely agree on how the time spent on the detailed outline helped make the research paper less stressful. I understand what you think about how your paper would be bias, but in my opinion, I think that because you have your own thesis about your thoughts, you have to have a slant towards your argument. I see how it would be hard to keep it from being completely biased! Good luck! - Camille
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