Friday, September 20, 2013

Thoughts before I sleep (My Character)


Hmm, I am really nervous about the Spanish test tomorrow. I studied a lot though.
Ugh, I need to clean my room so Mom will let me go to the party on Friday. It’s not even that messy and I cleaned it last week!
Spanish test….spanish test…..spanish test
The cupcakes I baked tonight were really good, except next time I will use a different type of flour. The brand of flour that was used tonight was a bit lumpy. I will get some from the grocery store tomorrow after school.
Ugh I have to clean my car.
I wonder if Timothy noticed me today. My hair looked so good today oh my gosh!
I need to run tomorrow; I had to many cupcakes.
What is Rebecca doing her science project on? She is so creative; the product is going to look so good.
Spanish test…..spanish test……
Buddy (her dog) needs to move over. He is laying on top of my leg and it kind of hurts!
How should I do my makeup tomorrow? Hmmm.
John (her little brother) needs to quite coming into my room. He is so sweet though it’s hard to tell him to stop.
Why do I have to clean my room AGAIN?
Rebecca was so funny at lunch today! She better come to the party on Friday with me.
Along with flour I need to get some more conditioner at Albertson’s. Hopefully they sell that brand there.
Well I might as well review Spanish again. 

2 comments:

  1. Haha. Your character sounds like she has a lot on her mind. A spanish test, her friends, boys, etc. can help you establish a plot and more characters in your short story.

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  2. I really like your character! She seems to have a lot on her mind, I can't to see how your character develops.

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