Hmm, I am really nervous about the
Spanish test tomorrow. I studied a lot though.
Ugh, I need to clean my room so Mom
will let me go to the party on Friday. It’s not even that messy and I cleaned
it last week!
Spanish test….spanish test…..spanish
test
The cupcakes I baked tonight were
really good, except next time I will use a different type of flour. The brand of
flour that was used tonight was a bit lumpy. I will get some from the grocery
store tomorrow after school.
Ugh I have to clean my car.
I wonder if Timothy noticed me
today. My hair looked so good today oh my gosh!
I need to run tomorrow; I had to
many cupcakes.
What is Rebecca doing her science
project on? She is so creative; the product is going to look so good.
Spanish test…..spanish test……
Buddy (her dog) needs to move over.
He is laying on top of my leg and it kind of hurts!
How should I do my makeup tomorrow?
Hmmm.
John (her little brother) needs to
quite coming into my room. He is so sweet though it’s hard to tell him to stop.
Why do I have to clean my room
AGAIN?
Rebecca was so funny at lunch
today! She better come to the party on Friday with me.
Along with flour I need to get some
more conditioner at Albertson’s. Hopefully they sell that brand there.
Well I might as well review Spanish
again.
Haha. Your character sounds like she has a lot on her mind. A spanish test, her friends, boys, etc. can help you establish a plot and more characters in your short story.
ReplyDeleteI really like your character! She seems to have a lot on her mind, I can't to see how your character develops.
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